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mistakes hi! please check for errors! grammar, phonetics, punctuation. also need to replace the word with a sense of "wander" If there’s no one beside me When my soul wander Then I will follow you into the dark And you show me the light

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If there’s no one beside me

When my soul wanders, 

Then I will follow you into the dark,

And you'll show me the light.

For synonyms to "wander", see https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/wander

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mistakes

hi! please check for errors! grammar, phonetics, punctuation. also need to replace the word with a sense of "wander"



If there’s no one beside me
When my soul loses its way,
Then I will follow you into the dark
And you will  show me the light
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Here's my version with a different idea: When you are not beside me, That's when my soul starts meand'ring, Looking for you in the dark, Praying to show me the light.

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