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What's going on Hello, everyone! I don't know any kind of work where people don't have any stress. We have to do a lot of things that we don't like. I can be not right and it's only about my environment. Unfortunately, we created this system of life ourselves. Humans invented a system of banks, governments, education etc. People invented space satellites, mobile phones, cars etc. However, how many people are happy? In my opinion, if we'll compare a percentage of happy people in our time to percentage of happy people who lived 5000 years ago we'll realize one simple thing - our system is wrong because people have less hope on happiness than earlier. We really created a world for a minority. There won't be changes in the future.

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What's going on

Hello, everyone!
I don't know any kind of work where people don't have any stress. We have to do a lot of things that we don't like. [ I can be not right ] I can be wrong  and it's only about my environment.
Unfortunately, we created this system of life ourselves.
Humans invented a system of banks, governments, education etc. People invented space satellites, mobile phones, cars etc.
However, how many people are happy? In my opinion, if we'll we compare a percentage of happy people in our time to  a percentage of happy people who lived 5000 years ago we'll realize one simple thing - our system is wrong because people have less hope [on]  for happiness than earlier. We really created a world for a minority.
There won't be changes in the future.

I can be wrong: sounds much better. Or, you could say:  I might be wrong. Both are idiomatic. 

After if, we do not use the future tense. For example:  If we go tomorrow; if John arrives late...


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