Why You Should Do More Reading (would someone please correct my writing?)

Three days ago, I was reading some articles on the web about the benefits of reading and I discovered a lot of interesting things. I found out that if you truly want to change your life--you need to read. Directly and indirectly, reading helps you to become more intelligent, to build your vocabulary, to develop your emotional intelligence, as well as a lot of other beneficial things!

Unfortunately, many people underestimate and misunderstand the power of reading because they were forced to read in school and the totality of that experience left them with a bad impression. I, myself, have always hated reading also since I was a child for much the same reason. However, once I broadened my perspective as I grew older, I finally realized and understood that it is essential to building your personality.

In conclusion, I hope that all of you enjoy my post and I also hope all of you start to read more!*

Hi. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to flesh out your thoughts a bit, and for ease of reading.  I hope that this helps you. J. 

* The focus is on reading, period, it doesn't matter if it is from a book, a magazine, or the computer screen.

3 days ago I was reading some articles about the benefits of reading on the web and I discovered a lot of interesting things.

Reading books helps you to become more intelligent, to build your vocabulary, your emotional intelligence and with a lot of other things...

Many people don't understand the power of books because they have been forced by the school to read and they developed a huge hate for reading and culture.

I've always hated books too since I was a child but when I started to change completely my lifestyle, I understood that they are essential to build your personality.

I hope you enjoy my article and i hope you'll start to read!!.

Hi Fernando!

We always have to capitalize 'I.'

I eliminately the word 'completely' because you wrote that you 'started to change' your life. You could write that your life 'changed completely,' OR 'completely changed' after the change is over. 

You wrote very well!