*This whole essay is actually very well-written but I hope my English proofreading skills are going to a right direction*
There might be still a few things that need to be refined but I will probably miss them so I'll try my best to proofread :-)

Correction:
Governmental subsidizing of school facilities

Despite the constant development of the education sector in our country, certain school and university facilities still require a reasonable amount of subsidies. Being a school teacher, I would like to <strike>determine</strike> support thesis in my essay which is the school facilities, in my opinion, require money investments the most.

Taking into account the role of schools in children's physical education, subsidizing sports equipment and facilities <strike>seems</strike> could be one of the most sensible things to do. <strike>And naturally</strike> Thus, the development of this sphere will tackle the current youngsters' obesity epidemic in some way. On the other hand, as it was quite reasonably stated during one radio discussion, sport is not a top priority for the majority of pupils, especially in high schools, as they <strike>come</strike> go there to study and prepare for getting into university.

Therefore, investing money in technology is a strategy which is likely to be accepted by a wider range of students. Equipping classrooms with interactive desks and computers, and children with personal tablets will not only make studying / learning more diverse and consequently more appealing, but also will increase students' educational / academic performance.

All in all, secondary education at this point undoubtedly needs a certain extent of financial input from the government in order to continue its development. And to the best of my knowledge, channeling the money into developing classroom technology will be the most reasonable way, as it will, <strike>above all</strike> prepare students for interacting with the modern world.