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Essay (CAE)
Why exactly young people should turn to sports?
It is hard to overestimate the significance of sports in modern society. Nowadays, people take up all types of exercising and most of the population finds it important to keep fit. Moreover, according to the latest survey competitive sports play a crucial role in breeding children. Therefore, the purpose of this essay is to define the greatest value of sports for young people and children.
It is commonly known that competitive sports influence the development of people's character traits. Athletes are usually more straight-forward and determined to reach their goals, and definitely such qualities as a strong stamina and a great level of physical health go without saying.
However, there are still debates whether these strength and relentless of character are positive features in the modern society, ruled by contacts and interaction, rather than by authoritarianism. On the other hand, there is another advantage of sports, nobody can deny: I am referring to the way exercising benefits one's health. Sports is even more vital for youth than for adults, as it helps form their body in a right way and teaches them discipline.
Summing up, the importance of sports for young people is apparent to everyone, however, youth does not necessarily have to take up competitive sports, as the greatest mission of athletics is to rear a healthy new generation, and not impose the competitiveness on the modern society.
2018년 10월 25일 오전 7:33
Anna
언어 구사 능력
영어, 프랑스어, 이탈리아어, 러시아어
학습 언어
영어, 프랑스어, 이탈리아어
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