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Need Correction! Dear Jhon, I will go to the bank and will withdraw money from the ATM machine. I will come back and will give you the money at the office gate. Right? Thanks, Koke

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Dear Jhon,
I will go to the bank and will withdraw money from the ATM machine. I will come back and will give you the money at the office gate. Right? Alright?

Thanks,
Koke
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Need Correction!

Dear Jhon,
I will go to  am going to the bank and will withdraw withdrawing money from the ATM machine. I will come back and will give you the money at the office gate. Right?

Thanks,
Koke


Hi the small changes made above just sound more natural than what you have written.  However, your note isn't incorrect.

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