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我变胖了,我想减肥 I am getting fat, I want to lose weigh 我变胖了,我想减肥,但是很难 I am getting fat, I want to lose weigh.But it is hard

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I am getting fat., I want to lose weight

I am getting fat., I want to lose weight, .Bbut it is hard.

You want to use the noun "weight" as opposed to the verb "weigh".  Also, you have 2 choices to correct.  1.) Do as I did above, or  2.) Use a conjunction like "and" or "but" to link the sentences.  You can write as a single sentence but it sounds more natural with 2 and that way, you don't need to use a colon or have it sound a bit like a run-on sentence.

"I am getting fat and I want to lose weight, but it is hard."

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