My house

I'm from Sao Paulo, Brazil. I live in at a house that is in the West region of the city.
In my house there are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, there is also (it's not incorrect, but it sounds more natural if you say 'also' or 'too [at the end]', depending on wich one you prefer) a kitchen, a living room, and a dining room and There is a garage.
In my bedroom there is a bed, a closet and a dresser, However (just a suggestion for making it sound better), there is no TV. On the dresser there is a laptop, and a printer. and inside I keep my books and notebooks inside (sounds better when you use 'inside' at the end) Though (just another suggestion). In the closet I keep my clothes, and my shoes and sneakers.


Congratulations! You didn't make a lot of mistakes, just errors related to the use of conjuctions, as you used 'and' quite a lot, when it wasn't necessary. 

My house. I'm from Sao Paulo, Brazil. I live in a house that is in the West region of the city. In my house there are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, there is a kitchen, a living room and a dining room. There is a garage. In my bedroom there is a bed, a closet and a dresser. There is no TV. On the dresser there is a laptop and a printer, and inside I keep my books and notebooks. In my closet I keep my clothes and my shoes and sneakers.