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Could you help to check my sentences?-The second story. Thanks you very much I'd like to tell everyone about my route to office today. Last night, i slept too late because my six-months daughter only want to play, not sleep. For this reason, i waked up lately at 7 o'clock. But early today, i had an important appointment with partners. Having no another way, i hastily ate breakfast with the hands.Next ten minutes, i got out my home, jumped and drived my motorcycle as fastest as possible. In Hanoi winter day, it was ten degrees and too much fog. Route became wet and glide. It was easy to create accidents if we were not carefull. When i wen the rout, in a sudden, i hear a terrible broken sound. I thought a accident had appeared. The flocks who were driving on the route reduced their speed. When i passed where the accident happened, i saw a inert body behind a couple rest part of his vehicle. "Be carful, if today the person in the accident, who take care your family". Those words were in my mind. I slow down my speed and drove to my office carefully. 8 o'clock, i arried my office in safe. Now, i decide to change my schedule to get out earlier. By this way, i do not have to join traffic hurriedly with high risk. As you know, many foreigner talk about taking part in Vietnamese traffic is the same venture game and we do not know what happen in front of direction.

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Could you help to check my sentences?-The second story. Thank you very much

I'd like to tell everyone about my journey to work today.
Last night, I went to sleep too late because my six-month old daughter only want to play, not sleep. For this reason, I woke up late at 7 o'clock. But early today, I had an important appointment with partners. Having no another way, I hastily ate breakfast with my hands. Ten minutes later, I left home, jumped on my motorbike and drove as quickly  as possible.


On a Hanoi winter day, it was ten degrees and there was a lot of fog. The road became wet and slippery. It was easy to have an accident if we were not careful. When I was riding I suddenly heard a terrible breaking sound. I thought an accident had occurred. The crowds who were driving on the route reduced their speed. When I passed where the accident had happened, I saw an inert body behind a couple rest part of his vehicle.

"Be careful, if today you have an accident, who will take care your family". Those words were in my mind. I slowed down  and drove to my office carefully. At 8 o'clock, I arrived at my office in safely.

Now, I have decided to change my schedule to get out earlier. In this way, I do not have to join such busy  traffic. As you know, many foreigners talk about driving in Vietnamese traffic like an adventure game and we do not know what will happen in front of us.

Lots of good work here, I could understand everything but there were quite a few corrections. Remember that 'I' in front of a verb (toi) is always a big 'I', even if it is not at the beginning of a sentence.

The article 'a' or 'an' depends on the sound that comes after, not necessarily the noun. So 'an apple' & 'A green apple"

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