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Fashion: origin goods or knockoff version? Nowadays the word "fashion" is a synonym for beauty, style and glamour. Every shop offers a wide choice of fashionable clothes and it is hard to resist the temptation to buy something new. Of course, a lot of people prefer to buy knockoff version because it’s much more cheaper than buy the original. But let’s think the difference in price is so huge. Fashion houses use good material fabric like a cotton and leather, also good threads and garniture. They make their products by professionals and on equipment. And what about copies? They are produced from bad materials and in awful working conditions. So, the quality of goods leaves much to be desired. From another side, fashion relies on trends, and trends rely on copying. So you can think of copying as a turbocharger that spins the fashion cycle faster, so things come into fashion faster, they go out of fashion faster, and that makes fashion designers want to come up with something new because people want something new. The copying helps condense the market into something that consumers can understand, so people want to follow trends, they want to be able to dress in a way that's in style; they have to understand that. Anyway, like any social phenomenon , knockoff versions have their own proc and cons. It depends from you to buy expensive but high-quality origin or cheaper and less qualitative copy.

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Fashion: Original or knockoff version?  

Note: another name for a fashion original is "brand name"

Nowadays the word "fashion" is a synonym for beauty, style and glamour. Every shop offers a wide choice of fashionable clothes and it is hard to resist the temptation to buy something new.
Of course, a lot of people prefer to buy a knockoff version because it’s much more cheaper than buy the original. But let’s think of why the difference in price is so huge. Fashion houses use good material like a cotton fabric and leather, and also good threads and garniture. They make their products by professionals and on high-end equipment. And what about copies? They are produced from bad poor materials and in awful working conditions. So, the quality of goods leaves much to be desired.
From another side On the other hand, fashion relies on trends, and trends rely on copying. So you can think of copying as a turbocharger that spins the fashion cycle faster, so things come into fashion faster. They also go out of fashion faster, and that makes fashion designers want to come up with something new, because people want something new. The copying helps condense the market into something that consumers can understand, so people want to follow trends, and they want to be able to dress in a way that's in style; they have to understand that. (who is "they" designers or consumers?)
Anyway, like any social phenomenon , knockoff versions have their own pros and cons. It depends from on you, whether to buy expensive but high-quality originals or cheaper and lesser quality copies.

Notes: The words in orange are just suggestions. The sentences are fine with out those words. The green note is more about content. The blue note is not a common expression, on the other hand is better. 

Great writing! I've never considered the role counterfeit items fit into the consumer/designer cycle.


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