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2019.4.18 I haven’t written an English diary entry for a long time. 我已经好久没写英语日记了。 It seems I always start with this. 似乎我每次都以这个为开头。 Recently, I have had many English lessons. 最近我上了很多英语课。 But when the teacher spoke fastly, I still couldn’t understand what they were talking about. 但是当老师说得很快的时候,我还是听不懂他们在说什么。 This is a very terrible thing. 这是一件很糟糕的事。 And I don’t like this feeling. 我不喜欢这种感觉。 Maybe I need more practice. 也许我需要多加练习。 And I always worry my Japanese, because I devoted more time to learning English. 另外,我也很担心我的日语,因为我投入了更多的时间在学习英语上。 I really think learning the two languages at the same time is a very tough thing. 我真心觉得同时学习两种语言是一件很艰难的事。

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4/18/2019 (writing dates in English is not the same as in Chinese)

I haven’t written an English diary entry for a long time.
It seems like I always start writing, then drop it. (This sentence seems unfinished. It doesn't give much explanation to what you're trying to say)
Recently, I have had many English lessons but (avoid starting sentences with conjunctions) when the teacher would start speaking quickly, I still couldn’t understand what they were talking about.
That's a very bad (it's either 'very bad' or 'terrible', not 'very terrible') thing and (avoid starting sentences with conjunctions) I don’t like the feeling of not being able to understand something.
Maybe I need more practice.
In addition, I am worried about my Japanese, because I devoted more time to learning English.
I really think that learning the two languages at the same time is a very difficult thing to do.
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2019.4.18

I haven’t written an English diary entry for a long time.
我已经好久没写英语日记了。

It seems I always start with this.
似乎我每次都以这个为开头。

Recently, I have had many English lessons.
最近我上了很多英语课。

But when the teacher spoke quickly, I still couldn’t understand what they were talking about.
但是当老师说得很快的时候,我还是听不懂他们在说什么。

This is a very terrible thing.
这是一件很糟糕的事。

And I don’t like this feeling.
我不喜欢这种感觉。

Maybe I need more practice.
也许我需要多加练习。

And I always worry about my Japanese, because I have devoted more time to learning English.
另外,我也很担心我的日语,因为我投入了更多的时间在学习英语上。

I really think learning two languages at the same time is a difficult thing.
我真心觉得同时学习两种语言是一件很艰难的事。

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