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Golden No.2 TV program Q.Some believe that TV programs have a positive influence on modern society. Others, however, think that the influence of TV programs is negative.on modern society. What’s your opinion? Please include specific details in your explanation. A.In my view, TV programs have a positive effect in our society. The first reason being they can increase our knowledge in many aspects. For example, NHK which is a Japanese public broad cast has not only interesting but educational program as well. The second reason being they can encourage communication between family members. For instance, we can enjoy same TV programs together and then communicate with each members about those programs. That’s why I believe that TV programs have a positive influence on modern society.

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Golden No.2 TV program

Q.Some believe that TV programs have a positive influence on modern society. Others, however, think that the influence of TV programs is negative on modern society. What’s your opinion? Please include specific details in your explanation.
A.In my view, TV programs have a positive effect in our society.
The first reason is they can increase our knowledge in many aspects. For example, NHK which is a Japanese public broad cast has not only interesting but educational program as well. The second reason is they can encourage communication between family members so we can enjoy same TV programs together and then communicate with each members about those programs. That’s why I believe that TV programs have a positive influence on modern society.
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Hi Kosuke,

My corrections are in bold. I hope this helps!

Best wishes,

Matt

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Golden No.2 TV program

Q.Some believe that TV programs have a positive influence on modern society. Others, however, think that the influence of TV programs is negative.on modern society. What’s your opinion? Please include specific details in your explanation.
A.In my view, TV programs have a positive effect on our society.
The first reason being that they can increase our knowledge of many areas. For example, NHK, which is a Japanese public broadcasting corporation, has not only interesting but educational programs as well. The second reason being that they can encourage communication between family members. For instance, we can enjoy the same TV programs together and then communicate with each other about those programs. That’s why I believe that TV programs have a positive influence on modern society.

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