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Longan Litchi after harvest,Now longan harvest! Is also one of the specialty of shenzhen,Peel it off skin, a stream of sweet scent straight drill nostrils.Pale white and transparent pulp,Can let a person's mouth water.In the days of the longan,whenever there are guests visit me,I will always take one dish of yellow orange orange longan,And proudly said to them:"wellcome you!"
2011년 8월 2일 오후 10:13
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Longan Fruit

Litchi after harvest,Lychee season is over.  Now it is time to harvest the longan (dragon eyes) fruit.   harvest! It is also one of the specialty products of Shenzhen.  Peel it off the skin off and , a stream of sweet scent straight drill whiffs of fragrance waft into your nostrils.  The pulp is pale Pale white milky and translucent  transparent pulp,Can let that makes a person's mouth water.  In the days of the During the longan season, whenever there are guests visit me, I will always take bring out a one dish of yellowish orange orange brown longans, And and proudly said say to them,

"wellcome you Welcome!"

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2011년 8월 2일
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