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Please correct my sentences I went to Kyoto last weekend with my friends. Recently I was feeling down because we can’t spend usually time. It’s reason coronaviruse. So I wanted to change my mind. We were sightseeing, eating, shopping and had fun. It was good trip.

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Please correct my sentences

I went to Kyoto last weekend with my friends. Recently I was feeling down because we can’t spend usually time. It’s reason coronaviruse. So I wanted to change my mind. We were sightseeing, eating, shopping and had fun. It was good trip.

I went to Kyoto last weekend with my friends. Recently I have been feeling down because we can’t spend the usual time together as the coronavirus is so prevalent. So I wanted to change my state of mind. We went sightseeing, shopping, ate and had fun. It was good trip.

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Recently I've been feeling down because my friends and I haven't been able to spend any time together due to the coronavirus. So I wanted to change my mind. Last weekend I went to Kyoto with my friends. We had fun sightseeing, eating, and shopping. It was a good trip. Good job on these sentences. I rearranged some of the sentences so that it would flow better.
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