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Foreign language I like studies foreign languages. I know English not very well. I speak Russia very well, because I' am russian boy. I would like going in United State of America and told with different people.

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Foreign languages

I like studying foreign languages. I don't know/speak English not very well. I speak Russian very well, because I'm Russian.
I would like to going to the United State of America and talk/chat with different/various people.

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Keep it up! :D

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Foreign languages

I like to study foreign languages. I do not know English very well. I speak Russian very well, because I am from Russia.
I would like to go to the United States of America and talk with different people.

 

Очень хорошо! I have made some corrections (which can be seen above).

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you speak good
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Foreign language

I like studying foreign languages. I don't speak English not that well. I speak Russian , because I was born in Russia. 
I'd love to visit (America/the USA/the US of A) and chat with different people (my buddies/my mates/my pals/my homies).

 

Это просто другой вариант, который написан с сокращениями и разговорными словами. Чарльз исправил, чтобы текст был написан в письменной речи. Его исправление очень хорошо сделано. Большинство моих изменений не являются исправлениями, поэтому просто считайте их дополнительным уроком. Так вот... вы можете научиться своему тексту в двух видах - разговорном и письменном! :) 

Я надеюсь, что ваша мечта сбудется, и вы полетите в Америку! Удачи в изучении английского языка. 

 

 

 

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