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网球比赛
有时候我跟朋友一起去打网球。他像是健美运动员一样有力。他每天跑步,和去健身房锻炼。在中学时,他跑得比别的学生快,每次都得冠军。我记得有次我们班爬一座山,那座山太高了,我们爬了两个小时,才爬到一半。因为我得一边爬,一边帮一位小姐拿包,所以很累,还出了很多汗。越来越累。忽然我跨了一步就跌倒了。我腿疼,起不来。朋友把我抬到帐篷里。所以别的人觉得他一定胜利,但是我老是赢过他。可能你想问我:怎么回事?这个问题很容易回答。网球跟西洋棋一样,最重要的事是战术。他又输了。当然他打得好,但是我知道他的战术。6比2,4比6,7比5,我总赢过他!这就是我爱网球的原因。不管你是否比对手弱,你也总会赢。你必须用你的脑子,预见他的行动。当然你必须跑得快,打得难等等。虽然第二盘他6比4赢了我。但是不管怎样头脑比力量更有力。在第三盘时,我以为我不会赢。随着球赛进行,我越来越累。比开始时我跑得慢了,也出很多汗。但是我的对手很着急,所以越打越犯错误。因此网球是心理战。(So, tennis is a battle of nerves) 你同意吗?我不像他那么着急。对了,他有一个赛点!但在赛点时我可以预见他的行动。哈哈,我认为要是我有更多力气,我会以6比2,6比2赢过他。我的朋友个个都打网球打得很好,但是他们不能赢我。在赛跑或者拳击方面,他们可以赢我,但是在网球方面不行。你打得好吗?
It's not a problem to find some free time to play tennis. 找些空去打网球是[对我]沒有问題的 Sometimes I go to the court with my friend. 有时候和我的朋友到球场打. He's very athletic and strong. 他又強壯又善於远动. Every day he runs a lot and he visits a gym as well.每天他去跑步[得很久], 也在健身室勤練In the middle school years he was running faster than other pupils. 在中学时, 他是跑得最快的学生. Each time he was a winner.每次都是个胜者. I remember when our class go to went climbing, up. 我记得 有一次, 和课班去爬山The mountain was really high. 这座山很高, It took us two hours and we just to reached a halfway of the mountain. 要两个小时才到 /半山/山腰/ I was getting tired and sweaty because I had to climb up and carry a girl's bag at once. 我又累又汗津津, 是因我也提着一个女生的包袋 背着 means "to carry on the back" I would prefer to write as ...我帮个女生提着她的包袋 for clearer intention. Suddenly I fell down after I made a wrong step. 突然间, 一脚不小心, 我跌倒下来了. My leg was hurt and I couldn't get up. 腿子好痛啊, 不能站起来了. My friend took me on with his hand and carried me to the tent. 我的朋友扶着我起来后, 就我抱着我进帐里了. That's why others people thought that he was definitely gonna going to win, but I always defeat him. This sentence makes no sense in relation to the preceeding situation. What I believe is that you wanted to express, "This is why others always thought of him as winner. However, I always defeat him in other ways." 因此很多人都认为他是个英雄勝利者. 虽然如此, 他是我常下敗将. Perhaps I suppose you'd ask me: how is it's possible? 可能你会问我: 怎么有这可能呢? 怎回事"How else", "what's this?", "How so?" depending on context. This way is much clearer and more definitive.
不管是否你比对手是否强弱,終於你是胜者也会赢。你必须要动用你的脑筋子,要预算见他下一步棋 used figuratively 的行动。当然 打网球你必须要跑得快而手脚要敏捷,要知進能退, 打得难等等 You can't say like this to mean play hard。要这就是愿意让他赢过第二盘又如何啊6比4。但是不管怎样脑子赢过力。头脑智能比体力 /胜/强/憂/ 在第三盘时,我认为我不会获赢难取。球赛越久进行,我越累, 手脚越不敏, 汗流如江. 不过, 同时, 。我比开始跑得不快,也出汗很多。但是我的对手很着急,所以越打越乱犯错误。打 因此网球如打神经/是心理/ 战. 你不是同意吗?我比他乱着急得少。虽胜我一筹对了,他有一个赛点!但在赛点时我未ト先知其举可以预见他的行动! 哈哈,我认为我要是我有更多力气,我会赢过就此胜了他一个6比2,6比2。我的朋友个个都打网球打得很好,但难是他们不能赢我。他们可以赢我在赛跑或者拳击可胜我,但是不在网球上, 是我敗将。 or more elegantly, "在网球上, 我敗将也" 你网球朮如何打得好不好啊?
There are places which I do not follow. If I'm wrong, let me know.
It's not a problem to find some free time to play tennis. Sometimes I go to the court with my friend. He's very athletic and strong. Every day he runs a lot and he visits a gym as well. In the middle school years he was running faster than other pupils. Each time he was a winner. I remember when our class go to climb up. The mountain was really high. It took us two hours and we just reached a half of the mountain. I was getting tired and sweaty because I had to climb up and carry a girl's bag at once. Suddenly I fell down after I made a step. My leg was hurt and I couldn't get up. My friend took me on his hand and carried me to the tent. That's why other people thought that he was definitely gonna won, but I always defeat him. Perhaps you'd ask me: how it's possible? It's easy to answer on this question. Tennis is like chess. The most important thing is tactics. He lost. Of course he plays good, but I know he's tactics. 6-2 4-6 7-5, I beat him! That's why I love tennis. No matter that you're weaker than the opponent, you'll be able to win. You should use your brain and forsee his actions. Of course you have to run fast and hit so hard. That's why he could win the second set. But finally brains defeat power. In the third set I thought I can't win. I was getting tired as long as the match was going on. Comparatively to the start of the match I was running slower and getting more sweaty as well. But my opponent was nervous, and he was making more and more unforced errors. So, tennis is a battle of nerves. Don't you agree? I was less nerveous than him. He had a match point. But I was able to forsee his decision at the match point. I think if I were stronger, I could win by 6-2 6-2. All of my friends play really good, but they have never beaten me. They can beat me in running competition or boxing, but not in tennis. Do you play good?
网球比赛。
为了去网球场打网球抽空没什么(什么意思?)。有时候我跟朋友一起去打网球。他是健美运动员般的,挺力人量大的。天天他跑步,也去参观健身室。在中学时,他跑得比别的学生快。每次得冠军了。我记得我们班爬上去了。那座山太高了,我们都爬了两个小时,才爬到一半了。因为我得一边走去,一边把一位小姐的包抱着了,所以又累又出汗,越来越累。忽然我一跨了一步就掉下去了。我的腿疼,所以不能起来。朋友把我拿的身体去拖到到帐篷了。所以别的人觉得他一定胜利,但是我老是赢过他。可能你想问题我:怎么回事?这个问题很容易回答。网球跟西洋棋很一样。最重要的事是战术。他又输了。当然他打得好,但是我知道他的战术。6比2,4比6,7比5,我经过他!这就是原因我爱网球的原因。不管是否你比对手弱,你也会赢。你必须用你的脑子,预见他的行动。当然你必须跑得快,打得难等等。这就是愿意他赢过第二盘6比4。但是不管怎样脑子赢过力量。在第三盘时,我认为我不会赢。球赛越进行,我越累。我比开始跑得不快,也出汗很多。但是我的对手很着急,所以越打越犯错误。因此网球是心理战。(So, tennis is a battle of nerves) 你不是同意吗?我比他着急得少。对了,他有一个赛点!但在赛点时我可以预见他的行动。哈哈,我认为我要是我有更多力气,我会赢过他6比2,6比2。我的朋友个个都打网球打得很好,但是他们不能赢我。他们可以赢我在赛跑或者拳击,但是不在网球。你打得好不好啊?
写的很认真,用心啊。我不会打网球,不好意思。不过我表妹超级爱网球,她喜欢Novak Đoković诺瓦克,德约科维奇。对的,做什么事情动脑筋比体力更重要
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