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We might have a school trip to your country next year. What do you think is the best time of year to visit? What are the most interesting things for teenagers to do in your area?
Hi Maria,
I am writing this letter to reply your questions about travelling to my country next year.
First of all, I think that my country is a beautiful and peaceful place, so it is good destination to come with your school friends. Besides, in Spain the weather is generally better than in another countries in Europe. As for this, I believe that the best time of year to visit it is in the spring because the days is sunny but it isn’t too hot like in summer.
What’s more, you may do many activities in the spring. For example, if you visit Barcelona, you will enjoy of activities such as going to a amazing acuatic park called Aquapark or going to the beach to do watersports. Also, there are another activities in my country like visit museums, or places of public interest.
Anyway, I would like to know if you visit my country to spend time with you here.
Love,
Brenda.
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Can you correct my mistakes, please?
We might have a school trip to your country next year. What do you think is the best time of year to visit? What are the most interesting things for teenagers to do in your area?Hi Maria,
I am writing this letter to in reply your questions about travelling to my country next year.
First of all, I think that my country is a beautiful and peaceful place, so it is a good destination for you to come with your school friends. Besides, in Spain, the weather is generally better than in another other countries in Europe. As a result for this, I believe that the best time of the year to visit it is in the spring because the days is are sunny but it isn’t too hot, like it is in the summer.
What’s more, you may can do undertake many activities in the spring. For example, if you visit Barcelona, you will enjoy of activities such as going to an amazing acuatic aquatic park called Aquapark or going to the beach to do watersports. Also, there are another other activities in my country, such as like visiting museums, or places of public interest.
Anyway, I would like to know if you do visit my country so that I can get to spend time with you here.
Love,
Brenda.
¡Excelente trabajo! :-)
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