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Some people think it is more important to spend time in
developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend
time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
20180818 Singapore
The relative importance of career development and
relationships with family or friends, is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to plan
their daily schedule. This essay will discuss both sides, and then explain why
I am more inclined to prioritize time with friends and family.
On the one hand, people who manage time by prioritizing
career development claim that dedication to their job can improve their life quality. The
primary reason is that the more time they spend for at their job, the higher the possibility of getting to get
a promotion, followed by an
increase in salary. With more money can
be allocated, their basic needs for food and sheltering can be
satisfied, coupled with the higher affordability more to spend on/a higher disposable income to
spend on concerning their pastimes/hobbies.
Every minute they spend for at work could they believe will equate to be
traded off for better living conditions. For example, they do not need to share a tiny
room with others because of a
tight budget, and they can treat themselves to a feast of sumptuous food after work, if they can
receive decent salaries.
However, people who prioritize time with friends and family
live a more emotionally satisfying life. Unlike their hard work for a job, which will not always pay off, their
relationships with
family and friends can be directly improved if more time are is spent with eachther,
this is the most effective way to gain acceptance and satisfy one’s emotional
needs. In addition, the support from family or friends plays a significant role
in motivating people to move towards his their goals steadily. They may offer emotional and
material supports to those who meet encounter troubles and back them up.
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