It’s not clear what you have in mind, but ‘time for relaxation’ is clearer and conveys an official-sounding tone like the original. ‘Time to relax’ is much more common but less official-sounding.
2024년 3월 30일 오후 3:41
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Yeh that's fine. Or you could say
'I think students need more time to relax at school'