Hellen
A few seconds ago, I watched a video on YouTube. In the video, the Korean guy ask to the people "1 dollar or mystery gift?" and the people chooses one. First guy don't say anything, but the second guy responsing "Mystery gift". On final, the Korean guy gave a tv to second guy and everybody on the hall stay very impressive and surprised.
2024년 4월 14일 오전 2:58
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A few seconds ago, I watched a video on YouTube. In the video, a Korean guy asks people, "1 dollar or mystery gift?" and the people choose one. The first guy doesn't say anything, but the second guy responds, "mystery gift". At the end the Korean guy gives a tv to second guy and everybody in the room is very impressed and surprised.
You start off telling the story in present tense, then switch to past tense. It's better to be consistent. Putting it all in past tense would probably be more natural.
2024년 4월 14일
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