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Tomorrow morning is my day off , I plan to go to my grandparents’s orchard to fetch cherry. One of my colleagues will come there. We have not seen each other for more than sic months. So a little excited.
2021년 6월 5일 오후 3:43
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Tomorrow morning is my day off , I plan to go to my grandparent's orchard to fetch cherries. One of my colleagues will go there. We have not seen each other in more than six months, so I am little excited.
Good job! It sounds like you have some fun plans tomorrow. 1. You would not depict two “ss” in grandparent’s it would only have one. 2. Since you are not picking one cherry you need to make it plural “cherries.” 3. I changed it to “go” instead of “come” because you are not presently there. You are going to be there tomorrow. “Come” the subject is going to your location. “Go” is a movement to another place. 4. “Sic” is just one letter off it needs to be “six.” 5. I combined the last two sentences because “so a little excited” is not a complete sentence but can be added to the previous sentence. You need a noun and a verb and “excited” can be either a verb or an adjective. If you wanted to make it a separate sentence you could say “I am a little excited.” That way “I” would be the noun.
2021년 6월 5일
Tomorrow morning is my day off , I plan to go to my grandparents’ orchard to fetch cherries. One of my colleagues will come there. We have not seen each other for more than six months so we are a little excited.
grandparent's=singular, grandparents'=plural
2021년 6월 5일
Tomorrow is my day off (if it just the morning, then you would say 'I have tomorrow morning off') I plan to go to my grandparents’ orchard to
pick cherries. One of my colleagues will go there with me. We have not seen each other
for more than six months so I am quite excited.
Have fun picking cherries. I haven't eaten any for a long time.
2021년 6월 6일
Tomorrow morning is my day off , I plan to go to my grandparents’s orchard to fetch cherry. One of my colleagues will come there. We have not seen each other for more than sic months. So we are bit excited.
In your last sentence, you left the subject so it's ambiguous WHO is a bit excited.
2021년 6월 5일
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