Riko
Good morning!
Today I’m going to drive with my friends to see the nemophila. It’s a bit cloudy, which is a shame… My friend is such a “rain woman” that it’s always cloudy or rainy whenever we hang out… lol But it looks like it won’t rain this time, so that’s a relief! I’m really looking forward to it!
2025년 4월 19일 오후 9:32
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Good morning! Today, I’m going to drive with my friends to see the nemophila. It’s a bit cloudy, which is a shame. My friend is such a "rain woman" that it’s always cloudy or rainy whenever we hang out. However, it looks like it won’t rain this time, so that’s a relief! I’m really looking forward to it!
Hi Riko! It sounds like you have an exciting day planned to see the nemophila with your friends! You did a great job sharing your feelings about the weather and your friend's nickname, which adds a fun touch. For improvement, consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance your writing. Enjoy your trip and the beautiful flowers!
2025년 4월 20일 오후 9:37
Good morning!
Today I’m going to drive with my friends to see Nemophila (are you talking about these blue flowers that you can find in Hitachi seaside park?). It’s a bit cloudy, which is a shame… My friend is such a “rain woman” that is, it's always cloudy or rainy whenever we hang out… lol But it looks like it won’t rain this time, so that’s a relief! I’m really looking forward to it!
2025년 4월 19일 오후 10:07
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