I live with my grandma, grandpa, uncle, aunt and my two cousins in the same house. Its a big family and we get along well. Although sometimes I get stressed out, I think it's good to have people by yo

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I live with my grandma, grandpa, uncle, aunt and my two cousins in the same house. Its a big family and we get along well. Although sometimes I get stressed out, I think it's good to have people by your side, looking after you. It teaches you how to deal with your feelings and the other one's feelings.

2021년 3월 2일 오후 6:53

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I live with my grandma, grandpa, uncle, aunt and my two cousins in the same house. It's a big family and we get along well. Although, sometimes I get stressed out. I think it's good to have people by your side, looking after you. It teaches you how to deal with your feelings and those of others.

Great job! But remember: "Its" is for possession, like "The dog was in its house". Although, "It's" can mean "It is" (for non possessive forms) or also "It has". Beside that, I changed the last sentence to "(...)your feelings and those of others". I'm not 100% sure if that sounds natural, but at least this way you avoid repeating the term "Feeling" :)

2021년 3월 2일

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