Kaori
Today's writing practice:
1) I want to change of fabric for my living room.
2) I like Tirolean and Alpen design like edelweiss, deer, Tirolean in a folk costume.
3) I found a online shop from South Tirol.
4) They are only German and Italian languages available, so I wrote a message in German to ask some questions.
5) One of my German friends checked my sentences and he said that it is absolutely unambiguous.
6) Therefore I sent my messege to the shop and I'm waiting for a reply.
Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰
2023년 9월 25일 오전 3:08
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Today's writing practice: 1) I want to change of fabric for my living room. 2) I
like Tirolean and Alpen design like Edelweiss, deer, and Tirolean in a folk costume.
3) I found an online shop from South Tirol. 4) There are only German and Italian
languages available, so I wrote a message in German to ask some questions. 5)
One of my German friends checked my sentences and he said that it is
unambiguous. 6) Therefore I sent my message to the shop and I'm waiting for a
reply. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰
2023년 9월 25일
Today's writing practice:
1) I want to change the fabric for my living room. This needs to be explained. Rooms are not usually made of or covered with fabric.
2) I like Tirolean and Alpine designs like edelweiss, deer, and Tirolean folk costumes.
3) I found an online shop from/in South Tirol.
4) There were only German and Italian languages available, so I wrote a message in German to ask some questions.
5) One of my German friends checked my sentences and said that they were absolutely unambiguous. (sentences is plural)
6) Therefore I sent my messege to the shop and I'm waiting for a reply.
Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰
Good job. I just don't understand the 'fabric' part. Maybe you mean decor, style, curtains,etc.?
2023년 9월 25일
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