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Hello everyone, I wrote an essay to practice english. The theme is "If I could live anywhere, where would i live".
I hope somebody help me to correct my english!
I would like to live in Europa with my family.
I have 2 reasons.
First, I love European streets and houses. They have a history. If i think about Europa, I remember the memory when i was in Germany. I walked on a stone pavement and saw beautiful churches and houses.
Secondly, they have a good public transportation. I have just started to drive a car, so I am nerves when i drive. I always think if i could use tram in my town!
Because of these reasons I would like to live in Europa.
I know that there are more appropriate reasons to live there!
2023년 9월 25일 오후 6:00
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Hello everyone, I wrote an essay to practice English. The theme is "If I could
live anywhere, where would i live?". I hope somebody helps me to correct my
English! I would like to live in Europe with my family. I have 2 reasons. First,
I love European streets and houses. They have a history. If I think about
Europe, I remember when I was in Germany. I walked on a cobblestone
pavement and saw beautiful churches and houses. Secondly, they have a good
public transportation system. I have just started to drive a car, so I am nervous when I
drive. I always think I wish I could use a tram in my town! Because of these reasons I
would like to live in Europe. I know that there are still more reasons to
live there!
Interesting point of view about my continent.
2023년 9월 25일
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