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Practicing my English with a pair of translations: 1- “The University first day is an event that usually represents a significant change into people’s life, for that reason it isn’t rare that anxiety appears. This anxiety can come into sight for a number of things related to novelty and fear because of things don’t go as well as one expected. There is a change in our usual setting (environment) and that can produce quite uncertainty. Maybe we don’t know what the way to our classroom is and we are afraid to draw attention to us if we are late, for instance. It can be fear to don’t be socially accepted for others as well.” 2- “It’s a little worryingly that almost half of the population fantasied in a recurrent way with a total domination order and a huge amount of brutality.”
2023년 9월 23일 오전 8:03
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Practicing my English with a pair of translations: 1- “The first day of University is an event that usually represents a significant change in people’s life. For that reason it isn’t rare that anxiety appears/occurs. This anxiety can occur/happen/appear for a number of reasons related to novelty and fear when things don’t go as well as expected. There is a change in our usual setting (environment) and that can produce uncertainty. Maybe we don’t know the way to our classroom and we are afraid to draw attention to ourselves if we are late. It can be fear of not being socially accepted as well.” 2- “It’s a little worrying that almost half of the population has recurrent fantasies of total domination involving a huge amount of brutality.”
UNCERTAINTY is a noun, so QUITE UNCERTAINTY doesn't work. SOCIALLY already imples that others are involved. WORRYINGLY would be an adverb - here you need an adjective. Good Job overall.
2023년 9월 24일
Practicing my English with a pair of translations: 1- “The University's first day is an event that usually represents a significant change in people’s life, for that reason, it isn’t rare that anxiety appears. This anxiety can come into sight for several things related to novelty and fear because things don’t go as well as one expected. There is a change in our usual setting (environment) and that can produce quite uncertainty. Maybe we don’t know what the way to our classroom is and we are afraid to draw attention to us if we are late, for instance. It can be fear of not being socially accepted by others as well.” 2- “It’s a little worryingly that almost half of the population fantasied recurrently with a total domination order and a huge amount of brutality.”
2023년 9월 25일
Practicing my English with a pair of translations: 1- “The University's first day is an event that usually represents a significant change in people’s life, for that reason, it isn’t rare that anxiety appears. This anxiety can come into sight for several things related to novelty and fear because things don’t go as well as one expected. There is a change in our usual setting (environment) and that can produce quite uncertainty. Maybe we don’t know what the way to our classroom is and we are afraid to draw attention to us if we are late, for instance. It can be fear to do not being socially acceptedby the buyers.” 2- “It’s a little worryingly that almost half of the population fantasied recurrently with a total domination order and a huge amount of brutality.”
2023년 9월 23일
Practicing my English with a pair of translations: 1- “The University first day is an event that usually represents a significant change into people’s life, for that reason it isn’t rare that anxiety appears. This anxiety can come into sight for a number of things related to novelty and fear because of things don’t go as well as one expected. There is a change in our usual setting (environment) and that can produce quite uncertainty. Maybe we don’t know what the way to our classroom is and we are afraid to draw attention to us if we are late, for instance. It can be fear to don’t be socially accepted for others as well.” 2- “It’s a little worryingly that almost half of the population fantasied in a recurrent way with a total domination order and a huge amount of brutality.”
2023년 9월 23일
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