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I think Daylight Saving Time (DST) may save energy, but if it causes health problems like fatigue or even heart attacks, I think it is not worth it. Losing sleep and feeling sick just for small energy savings does not seem like a good fhings.
2025년 6월 3일 오전 4:29
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I think Daylight Saving Time (DST) may save energy, but if it causes health problems like fatigue or even heart attacks, I think it is not worth it. Losing sleep and feeling sick just for tiny energy savings does not seem like a good thing.
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2025년 6월 6일 오전 8:50
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