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In last Sunday, I went to Aichi. Because there is an event of my favorite idol. I woke up early and I went by Shinkansen. It is difficult for me to wake up early, so I was a little tired, but I enjoyed. At the event, I made some friends. I was happy because I made new friends there. We're close age, we talked a lot. We promised about go to another event together next time. After the event, I ate Kishimen in Nagoya station with my friends. It first time eating Kishimen, it was very delicious. After that, I bought souvenir for my friends. I talked my friends until I leave. I hope to meet at various events.

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Last Sunday, I went to Aichi to attend an event featuring my favorite idol. I woke up early and took the Shinkansen to get there. It is difficult for me to wake up early, so I was a little tired, but I still had a great time. At the event, I made some new friends. I was really happy because we were around the same age, and we had a lot to talk about. We promised to go to another event together next time. After the event, I ate kishimen with my friends at Nagoya Station. It was my first time trying kishimen, and it was delicious! After that, I bought some souvenirs for my friends. I talked with my new friends until it was time to leave. I hope we can meet again at other events in the future.
Great writing! The only adjustments I made were to make it sound more natural.

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