Sbrudolo
Hello everyone i have tried to write a little song. can you tell me is there any grammatical error? ? Thank you very much! -- In a world so vast, where meaning seems lost Question: existence. The ultimate cost Born into this chaos, mere side effect The power to make our lives connect Born into this chaos, side effect Puzzle incomplete We wander through the shadows, searching for light In the depths of our souls, we ignite (we ignite) Life's true beauty lies in the journey we tread But we hold the power to make our lives connect. Life, a puzzle incomplete. Find the missing pieces, make it sweet. No purpose by default, it's up to you and me to give it meaning. Spirits free. A Puzzle incomplete
2023년 7월 31일 오후 4:30
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How lovely that you’ve written a song, thanks for sharing it. Since you have artistic license with lyrics, I can’t tell you that the sentences are incomplete because it’s poetic. I don’t see any grammatical errors though, congratulations! Only two small errors in your  opening question: … can you tell me if there are any errors…(are/errors)
2023년 7월 31일
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