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I still remember that afternoon, it was raining outside, and my mother just had a free time. She moved all the tables and benches to make a little space in the room. Then she whirled quickly with baby ME in her arms. I laughed and she laughed, and it was like riding a roller coaster. After all these years, that is still my happiest moment. How I miss those carefree days.
2021년 9월 25일 오전 11:07
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I still remember that afternoon, it was raining outside, and my mother had just a little bit of free time. She moved all the tables and benches to make a little space in the room. Then she whirled around quickly with baby ME in her arms. I laughed and she laughed, and it was like riding a roller coaster. After all these years, that is still my happiest moment. How I miss those carefree days.
Good job! With ‘free time’, we normally need to use some sort of measure word- for example “do you have ANY free time?” -“yes, I have SOME (free time), but just A LITTLE”. We can’t say ‘a free time’.
2021년 9월 25일
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