何箫居
At first, this looks like a daunting challenge for learners, because even slight differences in sounds might make you unable to understand anything.
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2021년 9월 26일 오전 1:54
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This looks like a daunting challenge for beginners, because even the slightest errors in sounds might it totally incomprehensible.
I have suggested some changes for you. Your reading is ok but you could pay attention to intonation and pitch to make it more lively. The current tone is flat.
2021년 9월 26일
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