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Guess it's cool. You could be happier by doing what you like and also making money at the same time
2021년 9월 27일 오후 5:59
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Guess it's cool. You could be happier by doing what you like while making money at the same time.
Your sentence is mostly correct, I just changed it to a more proper version.
2021년 9월 27일
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Guess it's cool. You could be happier by doing what you like and also making
money at the same time
Nothing wrong with your text.
2021년 9월 27일
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