Elena Lénártová
In my opinion the best gift you can give my children is my time. When we can pass time together doing some interesting activities, or talking about our experiences that is the best oportunity to create happy memories. When we share our needs, imagines and feelings we are building a special firm and unbreakable relationship with children.
2021년 9월 28일 오전 5:25
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In my opinion, the best gift I can give my children is my time. When we can spend time together doing interesting activities, or talking about our experiences, that is the best opportunity to create happy memories. When we share our needs, dreams and feelings, we are building a special, firm and unbreakable relationship with our children.
2021년 9월 28일
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In my opinion, the best gift I can give my children is my time. When we can spend time together in doing some interesting activities, or talking about our experiences, that is the best oportunity to create happy memories. When we share our needs, imagination and feelings, we are building a special, firm and unbreakable bond with our children.
2021년 9월 28일
In my opinion the best gift I can give my children is my time. When we can spend time together doing some interesting activities, or talking about our experiences that is the best oportunity to create happy memories. When we share our needs, experiences and feelings we build a special, firm and unbreakable relationship with our children.
Hey Elena, here are some corrections and I hope you find them helpful. If you are interested in having English conversational lessons with a patient, friendly and creative native English speaker please feel free to book a lesson with me. I focus more on speaking and listening skills.
2021년 9월 28일
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