There are many factors which can definintely influence the success of a business.One of them is confidence , if people are confident about themselves .they can be more successed .

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2021년 9월 28일 오후 1:07

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Hello there, you should/may use this format. Many factors can influence the success of a business. One of them is confidence, if people are more confident about themselves, they can become more successful.

2021년 9월 28일

There are many factors that can definitely influence the success of a business. One of them is confidence, if people are confident in themselves they can become more successful.

2021년 9월 28일

There are many factors which can definitely influence the success of a business.One of them is confidence ; if people are confident about themselves, they can be more successful .

No major mistakes so far ! Nice job ;)

2021년 9월 28일

There are many factors which can definitely influence the success of a business.One of them is confidence. If people are confident about themselves, they can become more successful.

2021년 9월 28일

There are many factors which can definitely influence the success of a business. One of them is confidence. If people are confident about themselves, they can be more successful.

Confidence is the key to success! I agree Flower

2021년 9월 28일

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