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Mari Kim
Long time ago, there were a halmoni and two sisters.
One day, on halmoni's way home with rice cakes for two sisters, out of the blue a tiger came up in front of her.
The tiger was very hungry and asked her for a rice cake.
Halmony noticed that the tiger would never happy with just one rice cake and keep asking more rice cakes.
She decided to run away after giving rice cakes to the tiger but unfortunely tiger swallowed her.
The mean tiger went to hamloni's house and pretended halmoni with her scarf around his head.
Could you please make my sentences sound more natural?
Thank you for your time and help.
2022년 2월 13일 오전 9:55
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Long time ago, there was a halmoni and her two sisters. One day, on halmoni's way
home with rice cakes for her two sisters, out of the blue a tiger came up in front
of her. The tiger was very hungry and asked her for a rice cake. Halmony noticed
that the tiger would never be happy with just one rice cake and it kept asking for more. She tried to run away after the giving rice cakes to the tiger but
unfortunely the tiger caught and ate her. The mean tiger went to hamloni's house and
pretended to be the halmoni with her scarf around his head. Could you please make my
sentences sound more natural? Thank you for your time and help.
2022년 2월 13일
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