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Today I had classes from the third period to the fourth period. The third period was biology, and the fourth period was Japanese language education. In the fourth period, we gave presentations and shared our opinion with each other.
I still haven’t fully recovered, and I’ve been having stomachaches. It’s really tough, but I’ll do my best.
2026년 7월 15일 오전 11:32
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Today, I had classes from the third period to the fourth period. The third period was Biology, and the fourth period was Japanese Language Education. During the fourth period, we gave presentations and shared our opinions with one another. I still haven’t fully recovered, and I’ve been having stomach aches. It’s really tough, but I’ll do my best.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, well organised, and easy to follow. You describe your day naturally and connect your ideas effectively. Your grammar is very accurate, and only a few small stylistic changes were needed to make your English sound even more natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 15일 오후 1:12
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