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Yuna
Today was my day off from university, so I spent the whole day at home. I was surprised because I slept until the afternoon.😧I planned to finish my report and study Chinese, but I couldn’t find the motivation. So, I decided to take a bath first to refresh myself. Now, I want to do my best and study Chinese. Summer vacation is just around the corner, so I’m really looking forward to it‼︎
2026년 7월 15일 오후 1:19
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Today was my day off from university, so I spent the whole day at home. I was surprised because I slept until the afternoon. 😧 I had planned to finish my report and study Chinese, but I couldn’t find the motivation to do them. So, I decided to take a bath first to refresh myself. Now, I want to do my best and study Chinese. Summer holidays is just around the corner, so I’m really looking forward to it!
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You describe your day clearly and use several natural expressions, such as “just around the corner” and “looking forward to it”. Your grammar is very accurate, and only small improvements in sentence flow and punctuation were needed. Keep up the excellent work! 😊
2026년 7월 15일 오후 9:27
Today was my day off from university, so I spent the whole day at home. I was surprised because I slept until the afternoon. My plan was to finish my report and study Chinese, but I couldn't find the motivation. So, I decided to take a bath to feel fresh. Now I want to do my best and study Chinese. Summer vacation is just around the corner, so I'm really looking forward to it.
2026년 7월 16일 오전 3:52
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