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Hello. Today I stayed at my friend's house and went to school. I had to get up at 7 o'clock, but I woke up at 8 o'clock. However, I made it to school safely. There was a big presentation today. I was very nervous, but I was able to present it well. I'll drink tapioca as a reward🧋
2026년 7월 17일 오전 4:45
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Hello. Today, I stayed at my friend’s house and went to school. I had to get up at 7 o’clock, but I woke up at 8 o’clock. However, I still made it to school on time. There was an important presentation today. I was very nervous, but I was able to give my presentation well. I’ll have some bubble tea as a reward. 🧋
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, natural, and well organised. You describe your day confidently and express your feelings effectively. Your grammar is very accurate, and only a few vocabulary choices needed adjusting to sound more natural in English. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 17일 오후 12:42
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