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Today, I went to university only for my second class and then returned home. After eating lunch, I watched a movie starring my favorite idol. Later, I went back to university for dance practice and walked to the station. For dinner, I ate tonkatsu. It was very delicious, and I had a busy but enjoyable day.
2026년 7월 17일 오후 3:27
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Today, I went to university only for my second class and then returned home. After having lunch, I watched a film starring my favourite idol. Later, I went back to university for dance practice and walked to the station. For dinner, I ate tonkatsu. It was very delicious, and I had a busy but enjoyable day.
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You describe your daily activities clearly and use time expressions effectively. Your grammar is accurate, and only a few small vocabulary changes were needed to make your English sound more natural in British English. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 17일 오후 9:38
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