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we could not see the sunrise because of clouds even though we woke up early. After that, we had breakfast at McDonald's, went to Miyako Tropical Botanical Garden to see papaya and banana trees, and took a walk in the park. Then we went to the Underground Dam Museum and learned about the island's use of groundwater as a source of water for daily life. Then my husband wanted to take pictures of airplanes, so we waited for almost two hours on the beach near the airfield for the planes to fly in. It was boring. We spent every day of the last three days photographing airplanes. It was nice and warm and relaxing. The temperature was about 20 degrees Celsius. Time was moving slowly and I didn't want to go back to the cold Aichi Prefecture. I returned home at 10:30 pm. It was a fun trip.
2022년 12월 27일 오전 8:08
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We could not see the sunrise because of clouds even though we woke up early. After that, we had breakfast at McDonald's, went to Miyako Tropical Botanical Garden to see papaya and banana trees, and took a walk in the park. Then we went to the Underground Dam Museum and learned about the island's use of groundwater as a source of water for daily life. Soon enough, my husband wanted to take pictures of airplanes once again, so we waited for almost two hours on the beach near the airfield for the planes to fly in. It was boring since we had spent every day of the last three days photographing airplanes. Apart from that, the trip was nice and warm and relaxing. The temperature was about 20 degrees Celsius. Time was moving slowly and I didn't want to go back to the cold Aichi Prefecture. I returned home at 10:30 pm. It was a fun trip.
Your grammar is excellent! I changed a few words here and there just to add a little variety. Hope that is OK!
2022년 12월 27일
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