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Today, I had a conversation with a Bible teacher. She and I talked about traveling in Scotland. However, her sister has a bad knee, so she cannot walk long distances. Sometimes, Chinese workers have to work on weekends to make up for public holidays. Many people dislike this arrangement because they are already tired after working five days a week. During holidays, I usually returned to my hometown because living in Beijing was expensive. Before the pandemic, I also volunteered in other countries. Some of my friends have asked me to teach them Chinese poetry, which I find very interesting. Now, when my friends ask me about them, I try to recall what I learned and explain the poems. I was good at Chinese at school, but I struggled with mathematics and English. Mathematics is important in the Chinese education system, and students' performance in different subjects can influence their university choices. We also discussed the parable of the rich man and Lazarus. My main reflection was that being rich is not necessarily wrong; what matters is how we obtain and use our wealth. We should also be willing to repent and turn to God.

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Today, I had a conversation with a Bible teacher. She and I talked about traveling in Scotland. However, her sister has a bad knee, so she cannot walk long distances. Sometimes, Chinese workers have to work on weekends to make up for public holidays. Many people dislike this arrangement because they are already tired after working five days a week. During the holidays, I usually return to my hometown because living in Beijing is expensive. Before the pandemic, I also volunteered in other countries. Some of my friends have asked me to teach them Chinese poetry, which I find very interesting. Now, when my friends ask me about them, I try to recall what I learned and explain the poems. I was good at Chinese at school, but I struggled with mathematics and English. Mathematics is important in the Chinese education system, and students' performance in different subjects can influence their university choices. We also discussed the parable of the rich man and Lazarus. My main reflection was that being rich is not necessarily wrong; what matters is how we obtain and use our wealth. We should also be willing to repent and turn to God.
Great. The only thing I would say is to connect the different paragraphs more logically. They are very disjointed and unorganised.

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