Global warming is now a extreme issue to all the human beings in the world, with the rapid rise of temperatures and air pollutions, the environment are becoming worse, we must realize the importance of protecting the environment,we can start by doing small things that contribute to our community,like picking up garbage, not throwing plastic bottles in the ocean, and countries should put more effort into investing advanced technologies to enhance our environment and climate.
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Global warming is now an extreme issue for all the human beings in the world. With the rapid rise of temperatures and air pollution, the environment is becoming worse. We must realize the importance of protecting the environment. How do we protect our environment? Well, we can start by doing small things that contribute to our community, like picking up garbage and not throwing plastic bottles into the ocean. And countries should put more effort into investing in advanced technologies to enhance our environment and climate.
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Global warming is now a extreme issue to all the human beings/everybody in the world, with
the rapid rise of temperatures and air pollution, the environment is becoming
worse, we must realize the importance of protecting the environment,we can start
by doing small things that contribute to our community,like picking up garbage,
not throwing plastic bottles in the ocean, and countries should put more effort
into investing in advanced technologies to enhance our environment and climate.
Well done. A nice piece of writing. Hope my corrections help.
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