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Dalvinder Kour
I believe that a teacher who enjoys her job and keeps patience while explaining her students, is consider as a good teacher.
2024년 7월 1일 오전 9:25
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I believe that a teacher who enjoys her job and remains patient while explaining (...) to her students is considered a good teacher.
Hi Dalvinder, I completely agree with you! I understood what you wished to convey, but I would make three important corrections. First, "keeps patience" sounds awkward to native ears. I feel most English speakers would say "remains patient" or "keeps her patience". Second, the verb "explain" is a ditransitive verb, which means it has two objects. One of the objects in your sentence is "her students", but what exactly is she explaining to them? For example, you might say "[She] remains patient while explaining concepts to her students." Third, a comma is unnecessary in this sentence. Otherwise, this is great. Keep up the good work!
2024년 7월 1일
I believe that a teacher who enjoys her job and keeps patient while explaining to her students, is considered a good teacher.
2024년 7월 1일
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