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Today is my day off. Yesterday I was thinking going out by myself for the first time in a while, but it looked like it was going to rain, so I decided not to. I stayed home all day. Speaking of rain, it rained heavily yesterday. There was also thunder and a small earthquake in the morning. I went to my part time job in the heavy rain. Despite the bad weather, there were many customers coming to my part time job. I hope it will be sunny tomorrow☀️
2022년 8월 5일 오후 1:33
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Today is my day off. Yesterday I was thinking of going out by myself for the first time in a while, but it looked like it was going to rain, so I decided not to. I stayed home for the rest of the day. Speaking of rain, it rained heavily yesterday. There was also thunder and a small earthquake in the morning. I went to my part time job in the heavy rain. Despite the bad weather, we still had many customers coming in. I hope it will be sunny tomorrow☀️
Hello, a well written text. I can relate as it has been raining heavily here as well. I made the correction about spending the rest of your day at home as you stated that you went to your part-time job yesterday as well, and therefore, could not have spent the the whole day at home. That is, if I am understanding your text correctly.
2022년 8월 5일
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