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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I went out and stayed at home. In the morning, I took a walk with my husband as usual. It was a warm day today. In the afternoon, I was watching American TV show on U-NEXT as soon as I had lunch. After that I called my friend so that I would learn English from him. I went to the acupuncture clinic, talking to him on the phone in a short time. In the evening, I made dinner as soon as I got home. I just finished having dinner. I’m thinking of watching Japanese Anime with my husband. We are going to sleep in tomorrow because we have a day off tomorrow.
2021년 2월 22일 오전 10:31
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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I went out and stayed at home. (You did both? Being at home is normal so you don't normally mention it unless you stayed in all day) In the morning, I took a walk with my husband as usual. It was a warm day today. In the afternoon, I watched an American TV show on U-NEXT immediately after I had eaten lunch. After that I called my friend so that I could learn English from him. I went to the acupuncture clinic, while talking to him on the phone for a short time. In the evening, I made dinner as soon as I got home. I have just finished having dinner. I’m thinking of watching Japanese Anime with my husband. We are going to sleep in tomorrow because we have a day off.
An eventful day!
2021년 2월 22일
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