Title: Animal shows
Is it okay to hold animal shows?
Please correct me and tell me your idea.
Here's my idea.
I think animal shows should be stopped to protect animals.
Firstly, people can't learn about animals just watching animal shows. They can go to zoos to learn about animals.
Secondly, all animals should be allowed to live with their family or other animals. If they want to, they can live with their family. If they don't want to, they can live alone. I think animals want to live this way.
In conclusion, I don't think it is okay to hold animal shows.
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Hello A Young! Here are my suggestions
Is it okay to hold animal shows?
Please correct me and tell me your ideas.
Here's my idea.
I think animal shows should be stopped to protect animals.
Firstly, people can't learn about animals just from watching animal shows. They can go to zoos to learn about animals.
Secondly, all animals should be allowed to live with their family or other animals. If they want to, they can live with their family. If they don't want to, they can live alone. I think animals want to live this way.
In conclusion, I don't think it is okay to hold animal shows.
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Title: Animal shows Is it okay to hold animal shows? Please correct me and tell
me your idea. Here's my idea. I think animal shows should be stopped because of animal safety (to protect
animals). Firstly, people can't learn anything about animals just from watching animal shows.
They can go to zoos to learn about animal life. Secondly, all animals should be
allowed to live with their family or other animals. If they want to, they can
live with their family. If they don't want to, they can live alone. I think
animals want to live this way. In conclusion, I don't think it is okay to hold
animal shows.
Dear A Young, it's a very interesting topic to think about. I share your opinion about animals shows, it's inhumane to treat animal like a puppet. My reasoning is the same for zoos, even if animal is born in a zoo it still has it's own nature which is wild and free. But I think that most of people who are working in zoos actually love animals and care about them. So, I think there is no bad intention... Still, curious people could find different way to learn something about the nature of wild animals, for example we could read about them, why do we have to see them in person... Or if you really want to meet them them go in wilderness on an adventure, risk little bit :-) what do you reckon about that?
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Title: Animal shows
Is it okay to hold animal shows?
Please correct me and tell me your idea.
Here's my idea.
I think animal shows should be stopped to protect animals.
Firstly, people can't learn about animals just watching animal shows. They can go to zoos to learn about animals.
Secondly, all animals should be allowed to live with their family or other animals. If they want to, they can live with their family. If they don't want to, they can live alone. I think animals want to live this way.
In conclusion, I don't think it is okay to hold animal shows.
Dear Anna, In zoos animals are held in captivity and are not free. Rather don't use it as an option to support your idea.
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