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Today, I had a lunch with my friends. We went to the Hawaiian restaurant and I ate a cheeseburger and french fries. It was so delicious! There are popular pancakes so, I want to try this. After that, I bought a lot of clothes at the Internet shopping. I enjoy to receive this.
2025년 6월 13일 오전 5:13
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Today, I had lunch with my friends. We went to a Hawaiian restaurant and I ate a cheeseburger and french fries. It was so delicious! There are popular pancakes, so I want to try them. After that, I bought a lot of clothes online. I enjoy receiving them.
Hi! Great job with your writing. Remember: We always say "on the internet" or "online". -Teacher Dani
2025년 6월 13일 오전 6:46
Today, I had a lunch with my friends. We went to a Hawaiian restaurant and I
ate a cheeseburger with french fries. It was so delicious! There are popular
pancakes so, I want to try this. After that, I bought a lot of clothes via
Internet shopping. I enjoy to receive this.
2025년 6월 13일 오전 5:59
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