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I feel like I am not sleeping enough every day. However, I also feel that my day is fulfilling. Therefore, I think that sleeping less makes the happiness of life higher. However, my meals are unbalanced, and I also feel a mysterious anxiety in the morning. A short sleep with early to bed and early to rise suits me. I have to take tests and submit reports until next week, so I will do my best.
2026년 7월 14일 오전 6:12
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I feel like I am not getting enough sleep every day. However, I also feel that my days are fulfilling. Therefore, I think that sleeping less may make life feel more exciting. However, my meals are unbalanced, and I also experience a sense of unexplained anxiety in the morning. A short but regular sleep schedule, with early nights and early mornings, suits me. I have to take tests and submit reports until next week, so I will do my best.
Level: B2+/C1. Your writing expresses complex ideas and personal reflections very well. You are able to connect different points and explain your opinions clearly. To improve further, focus on using more natural collocations and academic expressions. Keep up the excellent work! 😊
2026년 7월 14일 오전 10:10
I really like the way you reflected on your daily routine. I’d phrase a few parts slightly differently: “I feel like I don’t get enough sleep every day. However, I also feel that my days are fulfilling, so I think sleeping less may actually make me feel happier. That said, my meals are unbalanced, and I sometimes feel a strange sense of anxiety in the morning. Going to bed early and waking up early, even if I don’t sleep for very long, seems to suit me. I have tests to take and reports to submit by next week, so I’ll do my best.” We usually say “get enough sleep” rather than “be sleeping enough,” and “a strange sense of anxiety” sounds more natural than “a mysterious anxiety.” 😊
2026년 7월 14일 오전 9:42
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