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It’s still freezing cold today. In the afternoon, my mom received great news—my uncle will be visiting us soon. In addition, he will be taking us on a trip to Hong Kong and Macao, and he has already paid for everything! Regardless of whether he gambles or not, he is definitely a great guy to me. Unlike the last trip, this time we will be staying in a fancy hotel with private pools in our rooms. My dad truly has a generous brother, and I can't wait to meet this great uncle.
2024년 1월 25일 오전 10:38
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It’s still freezing cold today. In the afternoon, my mom received (some) great news—my uncle will be visiting us soon. In addition, he will be taking us on a trip to Hong Kong and Macao, and he has already paid for everything! Regardless of whether he gambles or not, he is definitely a great guy to me. Unlike the last trip, this time we will be staying in a fancy hotel with private pools in our rooms. My dad truly has a generous brother, and I can't wait to meet this great uncle. (Nothing wrong with “great” here, but it could be confusing as a “great-uncle” is a brother of your grandfather or grandmother.)
Sounds wonderful l. Back to HK so soon! A pool in your room seems interesting!
2024년 1월 25일
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It’s still freezing cold today. This afternoon, my mom got the good news that my uncle will be visiting us soon. What's more, he will be taking us on a trip to Hong Kong and Macao, and he has already paid for everything! Regardless of whether he gambles or not, he is definitely a great guy to me. Unlike the last trip, this time we will be staying in a fancy hotel with private pools in our rooms. My dad truly has a generous brother, and I can't wait to meet this wonderful uncle.
2024년 1월 25일
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