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I went to my grandma's place and found a bamboo recorder. They said they almost
threw it away. They don't take it as a serious musical instrument.
I remember the time
My grandmother purchased it for $1 during my summer holiday when I was young. I
seldom saw my parents, and I am the only child due to China's one-child family
policy. I had to spend time with my grandma, who didn't know how to educate me.
No one taught me how to play it, and I am not talented enough to be a self-taught .
The only thing that I could do was read. But only reading is too boring,
so sometimes I hoped to listen to and play some music.
Today I saw the same one
from Taobao, but it costs 4 dollars now. And I finally know its Chinese name. I
thought it was called dizi before, but dizi is side-blown and normally with a
special membrane called dimo. Xiao is a vertical bamboo flute, but it definitely
is not a Xiao. It's good, 20 years has passed, and I still don't know how to
play it, at least now , I know its name.
2022년 8월 9일 오후 3:15
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I went to my grandma's place and found /discovered a bamboo recorder. They said they almost threw it away. They don't take /think of it as a serious musical instrument.
I remember the time my grandmother purchased /bought it for $1 during my summer holiday when I was young. I seldom saw /I didn’t often see my parents, and I am the only child due to China's one-child family policy. I had to spend time with my grandma, who didn't know how to educate /teach me how to play it. No one taught me how to play it, and I am not talented /clever enough to teach myself /be self-taught .
The only thing that I could do was read. But only reading is too boring, so sometimes I hoped to listen to and play some music.
Today I saw the same one from Taobao, but it costs 4 dollars now. And I finally know its Chinese name. I thought before that it was called a dizi, but a dizi is side-blown and normally with /has a special membrane called a dimo. The xiao is a vertical bamboo flute, but it definitely is not a xiao.
It's good ; 20 years has passed, and I still don't know how to play it but, at least now , I know its name.
A good story, well-written ; I’ve made suggestions for slightly better word choices, and added articles i e ‘a’ / ‘the’ which are necessary in English when talking about a physical object.
2022년 8월 9일
I went to my grandma's place and found a bamboo recorder. They said they almost
threw it away. They don't take it as a serious musical instrument.
I remember the time my grandmother purchased it for $1 during my summer holiday when I was young. I
seldom saw my parents, and I am the only child due to China's one-child family
policy. I had to spend time with my grandma, who didn't know how to educate me.
No one taught me how to play it and I am not talented enough to be self-taught.
The only thing that I could do was read. But only reading is too boring,
so sometimes I hoped to listen to and play some music.
Today I saw the same one
from Taobao, but it costs 4 dollars now. And I finally know its Chinese name. I
thought it was called dizi before, but dizi is side-blown and normally with a
special membrane called dimo. Xiao is a vertical bamboo flute, but it definitely
is not a Xiao. It's good, 20 years has passed and I still don't know how to
play it, at least now I know its name.
2022년 8월 9일
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언어 구사 능력
중국어(북경어), 중국어(광동어), 영어, 독일어, 이탈리아어, 일본어, 티베트어
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